More and more people are leaving countryside to live in cities. Do more advantages or disadvantages of this development for environment

An increasing number who moved from cities to rural areas occurred in several countries. In

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benefits and drawbacks towards the

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trend. Cities nowadays are densely populated,

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their belief in higher opportunities

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finding jobs.

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, the new working arrangement in several companies to work remotely

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increased the number of

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movement brings several benefits to the

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as the reducing amount of carbon emissions that are produced in the city

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of the falling amount of private vehicles used by citizens. Another advantage

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happened to the figure for household waste, which

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dropped because of the decrease in the city population. To illustrate, the number of workers in Jakarta decreased significantly after the pandemic 2020,

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the air quality getting better because the pollution is going down. Meanwhile, the movement of people to rural areas may create some disadvantages. Some land or

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may get smaller,

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of some individuals using the land to build

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for accommodation.

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, the unit of transportation may increase which

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directly could impact the air pollution in the area. Both of those conditions are the impact of human activity on the

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, as the people in rural areas grow, the housing development sees the opportunity to build new residential and take over some land or forest.

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, environmental issues may occur because of the reduction of area for water infiltration. In conclusion, the movement of people to the countryside may bring benefits to the

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as increasing air quality and reducing household waste in the city. I,

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, remain firmly convinced that the merits eclipsed the demerits.