The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.
the pie chart shows the
proportion
of main
reasons Correct article usage
the main
phone
are used by teenagers in Fix the agreement mistake
phones
a
African state, Change the article
an
started
from 2016 to 2019.
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starting
overall
, social networks was
the biggest Change the verb form
were
proportion
year by year, followed by email, digital
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and digital
camera
, and the least was Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
phone
calls as
the smallest Change preposition
apply
proportion
.
In 2016, social networks was
in Change the verb form
were
a
half of the total Correct article usage
apply
proportion
, whle
in 2017 decreased to 48%. Correct your spelling
while
in
2018 Capitalize word
In
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
increase
as much as 3% and in the Wrong verb form
increased
last
year it becomes
the Wrong verb form
became
higest
which had 56%. There was Correct your spelling
highest
decreasing
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a decreasing
proportion
of youth used
their Correct pronoun usage
who used
phone
for email. in
2016 to 2017 Change preposition
From
decrease
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decreased
a
percent and it was Change preposition
by a
same
as in 2018 to 2019. Correct article usage
the same
Digital
camera was used 15% in 2016 and it same as Add an article
The digital
A digital
2107
. Change preposition
in 2107
while
2018 and 2019 each are 18% and 20%. Phone
calls was
only 10% in 2016. it Change the verb form
were
increasd
in 2017 became 13%, but decreased as much as 11% in 2018, and it became smaller in 2019 which had 5% only.Correct your spelling
increased
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