The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line diagram demonstrates the cost of bananas in four different countries namely,
Japan
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, France, Germany and
USA
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the USA
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in the year 1996 to 2004.
Overall
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, it is evident from the graph that
Japan
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had the maximum
sales
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of bananas and the USA had the least amount of
sales
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. In 1996,
Japan
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and France had the highest
sales
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of bananas
of
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at
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about 2$ per
kg
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,
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however
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however,
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both these countries had a
fluctuction
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fluctuation
in the
sales
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rate
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over the years.
Japan
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's
sales
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rate
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declined drastically in 2003 with the figure of 1.5$ per
kg
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,
although
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this
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rate
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inclined sharply in 2004 with 2.5 $per
kg
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.
On the other hand
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, France
sales
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remained constant from 2003 to 2004 with 2$ per
kg
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.
In contrast
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, the USA depicts the
least
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lowest
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sales
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rate
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in 1996 with a figure of 1$ per
kg
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and peaked
to
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at
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1.3$ per
kg
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in 1998 and remained stable
throughtout
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throughout
the years until 2004. Germany had a fluctuation trend and
then
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inclined to 2$ per
kg
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in 2002.
However
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, it
further
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showed a
declined
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declining
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trend in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, sales, kg, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Fluctuate
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stable/Stability
  • Significant
  • Gradual
  • Sharp
  • Slight
  • Peak
  • Plummet
  • Spike
  • Level off
  • Dip
  • Plateau
  • Cost
  • Price
  • Currency
  • Decade
  • Year-on-year
  • Economic factors
  • Consumer demand
  • Inflation
  • Market forces
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