The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line diagram demonstrates the cost of bananas in four different countries namely,
Japan
, France, Germany and USA
in the year 1996 to 2004. Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that Japan
had the maximum sales
of bananas and the USA had the least amount of sales
.
In 1996, Japan
and France had the highest sales
of bananas of
about 2$ per Change preposition
at
kg
, however
both these countries had a Add a comma
however,
fluctuction
in the Correct your spelling
fluctuation
sales
rate
over the years. Japan
's sales
rate
declined drastically in 2003 with the figure of 1.5$ per kg
, although
this
rate
inclined sharply in 2004 with 2.5 $per kg
. On the other hand
, France sales
remained constant from 2003 to 2004 with 2$ per kg
.
In contrast
, the USA depicts the least
Correct word choice
lowest
sales
rate
in 1996 with a figure of 1$ per kg
and peaked to
1.3$ per Change preposition
at
kg
in 1998 and remained stable throughtout
the years until 2004. Germany had a fluctuation trend and Correct your spelling
throughout
then
inclined to 2$ per kg
in 2002. However
, it further
showed a declined
trend in 2004.Replace the word
declining
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