The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line diagram demonstrates the cost of bananas in four different countries namely,
Japan
, France, Germany and Use synonyms
USA
in the year 1996 to 2004. Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that Linking Words
Japan
had the maximum Use synonyms
sales
of bananas and the USA had the least amount of Use synonyms
sales
.
In 1996, Use synonyms
Japan
and France had the highest Use synonyms
sales
of bananas Use synonyms
of
about 2$ per Change preposition
at
kg
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
both these countries had a Add a comma
however,
fluctuction
in the Correct your spelling
fluctuation
sales
Use synonyms
rate
over the years. Use synonyms
Japan
's Use synonyms
sales
Use synonyms
rate
declined drastically in 2003 with the figure of 1.5$ per Use synonyms
kg
, Use synonyms
although
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
rate
inclined sharply in 2004 with 2.5 $per Use synonyms
kg
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, France Linking Words
sales
remained constant from 2003 to 2004 with 2$ per Use synonyms
kg
.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, the USA depicts the Linking Words
least
Correct word choice
lowest
sales
Use synonyms
rate
in 1996 with a figure of 1$ per Use synonyms
kg
and peaked Use synonyms
to
1.3$ per Change preposition
at
kg
in 1998 and remained stable Use synonyms
throughtout
the years until 2004. Germany had a fluctuation trend and Correct your spelling
throughout
then
inclined to 2$ per Linking Words
kg
in 2002. Use synonyms
However
, it Linking Words
further
showed a Linking Words
declined
trend in 2004.Replace the word
declining
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