You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit

#house #friend #•explain #•describe #•invite #visit

Dear Ravi, I am writing

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this

letter to

infrom

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inform

in from

you, I

move

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am moving

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a diffrenet

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diffrenet

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different

house

. Because

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any

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My old

house

is too small and my all family

member

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come and live with me. So I plan to move to

big

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house

and stay with my family. And Recently I have Pramot to senior

superviser

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supervisor

and

also

my salary was

incresed

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increased

. My NEW

HOUSE

IS VERY BIF there Three

bedroom

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and

attch

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bathroom. and one living

Room

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and a kitchen and

also

children

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drowing

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dining

room are

avelable

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available

. It is

very

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large

house

and all

type

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are Fecality here.

Aloso

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Also

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beautiful

beautyfull

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beautiful

view

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my bedroom

windoo

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window

and behind my

house

their

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is a one garden and some

glosary

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glossary

shop and super marker are

avelable

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available

nearst

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nearest

near

house

Also

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their

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are

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available

avelable

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one

specess

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species

balkany

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balcony

balk any

and I sit on Chair and spend my free time

and

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reading the books.

This

is a

beautifull

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beautiful

house

and I Invite

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you to

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see

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my new

house

and take some and talking our old

memoryes

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memories

. I

hpoe

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hope

you like my new

house

your

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faithfully, Parth Patel.

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to use clear paragraphs to separate different ideas. Each paragraph should contain one main idea related to the question.

coherence cohesion

Use a variety of conjunctions and cohesive devices to link ideas within and between sentences and paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

Check the grammar and spelling of your writing; errors can reduce clarity and coherence.

task achievement

Remember to address all parts of the task. In this case, explain why you have moved, describe the new house, and invite your friend in separate sections for clarity.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter. It should be friendly and informal, as you are writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Use a friendly closing and opening salutation that matches the tone of the letter and the relationship you have with your friend. For example, 'Dear [First Name]' at the beginning and 'Best wishes' or 'Warm regards' at the end.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
43Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

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modern
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commute
scenic
landmarks
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convivial gathering
housewarming
cozy
landscaped garden
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up-and-coming area
expansive view

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit

The Closing

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