You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit

#house #friend #•explain #•describe #•invite #visit

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Dear Ravi, I am writing

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letter to

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inform

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you, I

move

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am moving

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a diffrenet

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different

house

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. Because

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any

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My old

house

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is too small and my all family

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come and live with me. So I plan to move to

big

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house

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and stay with my family. And Recently I have Pramot to senior

superviser

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supervisor

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my salary was

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increased

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HOUSE

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IS VERY BIF there Three

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and

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bathroom. and one living

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and a kitchen and

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children

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drowing

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dining

room are

avelable

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available

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very

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large

house

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and all

type

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are Fecality here.

Aloso

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beautiful

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beautiful

view

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my bedroom

windoo

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window

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house

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their

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is a one garden and some

glosary

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glossary

shop and super marker are

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available

nearst

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nearest

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are

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available

avelable

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specess

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species

balkany

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balcony

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and I sit on Chair and spend my free time

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reading the books.

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is a

beautifull

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beautiful

house

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and I Invite

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see

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my new

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and take some and talking our old

memoryes

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memories

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hpoe

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hope

you like my new

house

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your

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faithfully, Parth Patel.

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to use clear paragraphs to separate different ideas. Each paragraph should contain one main idea related to the question.

coherence cohesion

Use a variety of conjunctions and cohesive devices to link ideas within and between sentences and paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

Check the grammar and spelling of your writing; errors can reduce clarity and coherence.

task achievement

Remember to address all parts of the task. In this case, explain why you have moved, describe the new house, and invite your friend in separate sections for clarity.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter. It should be friendly and informal, as you are writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Use a friendly closing and opening salutation that matches the tone of the letter and the relationship you have with your friend. For example, 'Dear [First Name]' at the beginning and 'Best wishes' or 'Warm regards' at the end.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

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modern
residential area
homely
amenities
downsize
commute
scenic
landmarks
nostalgic
convivial gathering
housewarming
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landscaped garden
architectural design
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serene environment
up-and-coming area
expansive view

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The Closing

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