In some cultures, children are often told that they can acheive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In general, adults encourage

children

to pursue their

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emphasizing the importance of effort to succeed.

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,

this

encouragement has

its

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both sides, positive

or

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negative.

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essay will examine the pros and cons of telling

children

that trying hard can secure

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success and my opinion before a conclusion. First of all,

by

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telling

children

that hard work always pays off can allow

children

feel

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confident

,

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so that they are more likely to accomplish more.

Many researches

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on self-confidence demonstrated that

children

who have positive thinking about their future could focus more on their tasks, and

as a result

, the possibility of success increased.

Moreover

, by teaching

importance

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the importance

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of effort,

children

can learn integrity and work ethics. Offsprings will take more ethical ways to succeed, not cheat

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to achieve goals.

However

, just emphasizing

endeavor

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might make

children

avoid

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reality. Sometimes there is a time for individuals to quit what they have prepared for a long time

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because

of the problems of

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world,

such

as money, lack of ability, or

unfortune

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unfortunate

events.

However

, if folks

immersed

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with

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the feeling that "as I was taught earlier, if I make more effort to achieve

this

,

then

I can succeed",

this

can lead to

vicious

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a vicious

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cycle.

Therefore

, telling constantly to

children

that

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the only condition for

ahievement

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achievement

is trying hard can give them

wrong

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perception

to

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accomplishment.

To sum up

, teaching

children

the importance of

endeavor

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is beneficial for

children

's confidence,

while

it can make young students obsessed with

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goals that

seems

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to be nearly impossible to achieve. I think on balance that before they enter

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society, it is important to give them confidence by telling them "

you

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can do

everyting

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everything

if you try hard."

This

sense of efficacy will give

children

energy

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the energy

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to try again if they fall down.