The diagram below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009.

The diagram illustrates how many houses were built from 2000 to 2009 in two cities in England.

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, in the first two years Nottingham was in first place, building slightly more houses than Derby: just above 50. In consecutive years

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, Derby took over and except for 2007, built the highest amount of buildings: approximately 350. In 2000 Nottingham managed to build 50 houses,

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number grew in the following year, but ended up dropping eventually in 2002. After 2002 though, there was a steady rise, which plumetted in 2006 and

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in 2008

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, in 2009 there was

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a resurgence, reaching exactly an amount of 250. Derby's results rose evenly from 2000 to 2003, when it reached a steadiness and did not fluctuate for a couple of years (2003-2007). Yet, in 2008, they exceeded 250 buildings and

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reached approximately 350, making the city all in all more effective than Nottingham.

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Jan 19, 2024

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