The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provided illustrates the amount of money earned by American households in three different years, namely 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of families
who earned $100,000 or more has increased throughout the given period, while
the number
of families
with lesser
amount of Add an article
a lesser
income
remained relatively stable.
In 2007, those who earned $100,000 or more were twice as many as americans
with $75,000 to $99,000 Change the capitalization
Americans
income
, meanwhile, the number
of households with less than 50,000 dollars income
per year used to be just over 50 millions
. Despite a slight fall in 2011, the Change to singular
million
number
of those with the highest income
in the Us has
increased significantly in 2015 and reached a peak of just under 35 million Verb problem
US
families
.
American families
whose income
was between $50,000 and $74,000 have never changed in number
from 2007 to 2015 and remained approximately 20 million individuals. This
is also
true for those with $75,000-$99,000 income
per year, which remained at relatively same
Correct article usage
the same
number
at the corresponding time. On the other hand
, the number
of Americans with under 50,000 yearly income
witnessed some slight fluctuations in that
years.Correct determiner usage
those
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