The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
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This
graph provides clear figures for the different household devices' electricity
consumption. It gives the specific details of the different appliances at the same time separately.
Overall
, it is interesting to see that the Spa (pump and heater) is in high demand for electricity
, which costs more than 166 dollars
and 2000 kWh
a year. By contrast
, the electric blanket only consumes less than $42 and 500 kWh
annually.
Three devices that cost the most money and consume the most electricity
are the washing machine, refrigerator, pool pump and Spa (pump and heater and they cost more than 83 dollars
and 1000 kWh
in one current year. Conversely
, electric blankets, microwave ovens, televisions, dehumidifiers and well pumps only need less than 42 dollars
and less than 500 kWh
annually.
Amazingly, there are also
some appliances that share the same demand for money and usage of electricity
. For instance
, it can be seen that both water bed heater and clothes cooler cost less than 83 dollars
and consume less than 1000 kWh
in the same year and they are in middle demand of money and electricity
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, dollars, kwh with synonyms.
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