The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
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This
graph provides clear figures for the different household devices' Linking Words
electricity
consumption. It gives the specific details of the different appliances at the same time separately.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is interesting to see that the Spa (pump and heater) is in high demand for Linking Words
electricity
, which costs more than 166 Use synonyms
dollars
and 2000 Use synonyms
kWh
a year. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the electric blanket only consumes less than $42 and 500 Linking Words
kWh
annually.
Three devices that cost the most money and consume the most Use synonyms
electricity
are the washing machine, refrigerator, pool pump and Spa (pump and heater and they cost more than 83 Use synonyms
dollars
and 1000 Use synonyms
kWh
in one current year. Use synonyms
Conversely
, electric blankets, microwave ovens, televisions, dehumidifiers and well pumps only need less than 42 Linking Words
dollars
and less than 500 Use synonyms
kWh
annually.
Amazingly, there are Use synonyms
also
some appliances that share the same demand for money and usage of Linking Words
electricity
. Use synonyms
For instance
, it can be seen that both water bed heater and clothes cooler cost less than 83 Linking Words
dollars
and consume less than 1000 Use synonyms
kWh
in the same year and they are in middle demand of money and Use synonyms
electricity
.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, dollars, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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