The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
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This
graph provides clear figures for the different household devices'
electricity
consumption. It gives the specific details of the different appliances at the same time separately.
Overall
, it is interesting to see that the Spa (pump and heater) is in high demand for
electricity
, which costs more than 166
dollars
and 2000
kWh
a year.
By contrast
, the electric blanket only consumes less than $42 and 500
kWh
annually. Three devices that cost the most money and consume the most
electricity
are the washing machine, refrigerator, pool pump and Spa (pump and heater and they cost more than 83
dollars
and 1000
kWh
in one current year.
Conversely
, electric blankets, microwave ovens, televisions, dehumidifiers and well pumps only need less than 42
dollars
and less than 500
kWh
annually. Amazingly, there are
also
some appliances that share the same demand for money and usage of
electricity
.
For instance
, it can be seen that both water bed heater and clothes cooler cost less than 83
dollars
and consume less than 1000
kWh
in the same year and they are in middle demand of money and
electricity
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, dollars, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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