The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2018.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2018.
The bar charts provide information about various occupations of
graduates
and
postgraduates
who did not apply for a full-time job after leaving college in 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen that a large amount of
graduates
preferred to study
further
and to
work
a part-time job. The same can be applied
for
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postgraduates
, but on a small scale.
For example
, 29665
graduates
chose to continue their studies,
whereas
only 2725
postgraduates
made the same decision and the difference is more than 10 times. In comparison, voluntary
work
is the least chosen option for both groups, at 3500 and 245 respectively.
Nevertheless
, part-time
work
was chosen differently between
two
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the two
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groups, where part-time
work
for
postgraduates
was almost at the same level as
further
study at 2535,
whereas
graduates
tended to choose part-time
work
on a much smaller scale comparatively.
On the other hand
, unemployment was almost the same for both groups considering their scales, at 16235 and 1625.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, postgraduates, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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