The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The illustrations present information about how
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
The process requires the recycling of plastic
bottles
. The bottles
creates
a lot of products, which are really crucial for people. Change the verb form
create
Additionally
, this
process is man-made, even machines do this
instead
of them.
First of all, people through plastic
bottles
to the
certain Correct article usage
apply
a
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apply
bug
for garbage. It Fix the agreement mistake
bugs
then
specific transport takes it away to the recycling centre. Moreover
, people who employed
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are employed
to
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for
this
job, sorting
all Wrong verb form
sort
bottles
Correct article usage
the bottles
to
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into
the
Correct article usage
apply
categoris
, Correct your spelling
categories
such
as, suitable and not useful. After that, bottles
are compressing
into blocks by their categories.
The resulting blocks take away for crushing which is connected with rolls. Wrong verb form
compressed
Afterward
, they are washed and when it is dried, especially machine Change the spelling
Afterwards
produce
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produces
plastic
pellets. Next,
pellets are heated and create raw materials. Finally
, from raw materials are formed end products, for instance
, containers, colorful
pens, t-shirts and ecological packages.Change the spelling
colourful
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