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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
#process #plastic #bottles
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The illustrations present information about how
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled. The process requires the recycling of
plastic
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bottles
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. The
bottles
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creates
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 a lot of products, which are really crucial for people.
Additionally
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,
this
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 process is man-made, even machines do
this
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instead
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 of them. First of all, people through
plastic
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bottles
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 to
the
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apply
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certain
a
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apply
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bug
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 for garbage. It
then
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 specific transport takes it away to the recycling centre.
Moreover
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, people who
employed
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to
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for
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this
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 job,
sorting
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sort
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 all
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bottles
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the bottles
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to
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into
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the
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apply
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categoris
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categories
,
such
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 as, suitable and not useful. After that,
bottles
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 are
compressing
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compressed
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 into blocks by their categories. The resulting blocks take away for crushing which is connected with rolls.
Afterward
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, they are washed and when it is dried, especially machine
produce
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produces
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plastic
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 pellets.
Next,
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pellets are heated and create raw materials.
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, from raw materials are formed end products,
for instance
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, containers,
colorful
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colourful
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 pens, t-shirts and ecological packages.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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