The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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The illustrations present information about how

plastic

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bottles

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are recycled. The process requires the recycling of

plastic

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bottles

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. The

bottles

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creates

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a lot of products, which are really crucial for people.

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this

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process is man-made, even machines do

this

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instead

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of them. First of all, people through

plastic

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bottles

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the

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apply

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certain

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apply

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bug

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for garbage. It

then

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specific transport takes it away to the recycling centre.

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, people who

employed

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this

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job,

sorting

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all

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bottles

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the bottles

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into

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the

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apply

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categoris

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categories

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as, suitable and not useful. After that,

bottles

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are

compressing

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into blocks by their categories. The resulting blocks take away for crushing which is connected with rolls.

Afterward

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, they are washed and when it is dried, especially machine

produce

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plastic

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pellets.

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pellets are heated and create raw materials.

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, from raw materials are formed end products,

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, containers,

colorful

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pens, t-shirts and ecological packages.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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9
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

148 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycling
mitigate
environmental impact
landfills
conservation
sorted
residual waste
adhesives
shredded
pellets
manufacturing
ecological
economical
sustainable
automation
raw material
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