The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?
Extracurricular activity plays an important part in our environment today.
However
, I believe creativity still holds a vital role in our current society and should be included in our education syllabus.
Craft work
has been pivotal in our Correct your spelling
Craftwork
life's
since Change noun form
lives
decade
ago and Add an article
a decade
still
present with Add a missing verb
is still
it
continuity as Correct pronoun usage
its
source
of income Add an article
a source
the source
to
Change preposition
for
majority
of artists. To elucidate Add an article
the majority
further
, crafts has
always been a Change the verb form
have
source
of beautification which is valued and desperate to owned
by the community. Add a missing verb
be owned
As a result
, many people used the opportunity by selling
them to generate income. Change preposition
to sell
For instance
, my uncle who is creative with drawings resorted to selling his craft as a source
of revenue and currently
he is a Add a comma
currently,
top notch
millionaire in his Add a hyphen
top-notch
residing
country. Correct word choice
apply
Therefore
, artist lacks financial instability due to
their creativity in artwork.
On the other hand
, fine-art
is unarguably important in Correct your spelling
fine art
children
curriculum as it keeps them busy from being rebellious during their breaks. Change noun form
children's
In other words
, kids tend to have free period
after the day's school activities which can lead to malicious behavior. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
Consequently
, art can be used to occupy their free-time
. Correct your spelling
free time
For example
, my aunty keeps her kids from being mischievous whenever they are free, by presenting materials to them for drawing and sketching with the aim of keeping them engaged. Hence
, the implementation of art in studies has overcome naughty behaviors
' during free time.
In conclusion, art, music and theatre Change the spelling
behaviours
has
played remarkable Change the verb form
have
role
in our society, with arts being a pivotal role as it being used as a Fix the agreement mistake
roles
source
of income, as well as
in overcoming bad attitude
during Fix the agreement mistake
attitudes
free-time
among school children when implemented in their syllabus.Correct your spelling
free time
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