The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The supplied pie charts illustrate the proportion of facilities utilized by individuals aged between 18 and 25 to watch
television
in Canada in the years of
2009 and 2019.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the conventional TV
was the most preferred device for watching television
in 2009, whilst it was overtaken by flat-screen tv
in 2019.
In 2009, Correct your spelling
TV
the
Correct article usage
apply
convential
Correct your spelling
conventional
TV
made of
35% of all devices Change preposition
up
using
to watch Wrong verb form
used
television
before decreasing dramatically to just under 4% one decade later. The figures for desktop computer
and Fix the agreement mistake
computers
laptop
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laptops
also
followed a similar pattern, declined
significantly over a 10-year period, from 18% to 12% and from 20% to 12% respectively.
Wrong verb form
declining
On the other hand
, it is clear that
the flat-screen tv
reached a peak at around 27%, the most used Correct your spelling
TV
devise
for Replace the word
device
television
. The mobile phones joined as the second most preferred facility option to watch tv
, inclined approximately twice as much as an initial percentage in 2019. Correct your spelling
TV
Furthermore
, the table witnessed a similar trend, increased
markedly from 5% to 19%.Wrong verb form
increasing
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