Plastic Shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree and what can be doen to reduce it

nowadays , the world has been confronting a big environmental problem because of the bad habits that societies are applying in their everyday lives . one of the issues that has been presented is pollution on the earth and ocean.

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is happening because many of the products used are

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-based. the perfect example is the elastic shopping carrier.

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, I agree with the idea of prohibiting using

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for groceries . To help the planet we can decrease

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. I will explain how could we do it in the following paragraphs . to embark on , there is a common consensus that using

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is prone

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hazardous consequences .

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, if disposable

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is dumped into the ocean

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could be entangled with marine life and food leading to serious diseases

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as disgestion issues. another dilemma is that these

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are considered non-degradable and when buried in the

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it leads to hazardous problems. Actually, these wastes take ten years in

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to decompose . So. if it is mixed with fertilized land

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could hinder plants from growing and erose the

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. ultimately, because of human activities ,

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are jeopardising land and marine life and

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the ecosystem .

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, there are plenty of methods that should be adopted to curb

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phenomenon .

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. those that take place in high authorities should impose strict regulations to diminish the utilisation of these

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and enforce hefty taxes for people who violate

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rule .

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, recycling companies have a vital role in conservation activities .

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, these companies can stimulate individuals to accumulate their

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for the recycling process and in turn, they will gain discounts on grocery products .

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, it will be beneficial schemes to redeem them in making other goods.

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, there a numerous ways to overcome

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a disaster . in conclusion,

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I acknowledge that

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waste has detrimenting the ecosystem which engenders disorder in marine life and damages the

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. I concur that there are harsh penalties against

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waste-discarding behaviours and unleashing a campaign for those deeds.