Despite better access to education, many adults today still can not read or write. In what ways are they disadvantaged?

Living in the era of advancement, getting

knowledge

is very easy. Having better facilities there are some individuals who remain

undergraduate

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as they have no interest in education,

as a

result

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they fail to achieve a lot of opportunities in their careers. In

this

essay,I will address

that

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why students leave their institutions before completing their degree by persuading a viable solution that can effectively

eveliate

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alleviate

the problem and bring about positive change. First of all,the main reason behind

this

illiteracy is the lack of interest, as they have indulged themselves in other activities

such

as playing video games and domestic responsibilities.

For instance

, if a student goes to an institution but the purpose of his life

to

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become a player he will never be able to get

knowledge

or complete his degree.

Furthermore

,he will not be able to pay attention to his studies.

Secondly

,our curriculum infrastructure

have

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a lot of problems and

this

is the second highest cause for adults to give up their studies. Take it as an example,

methodology

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of teaching in our country continuously changes every other day. Changing curriculum and methods have a bad impact on student's health and minds.

Therefore

,they prefer to earn some wealth by doing

own

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business

instead

of getting

education

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. To tackle

this

issue,

firstly

,the state should

inhence

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enhance

the methods of teaching

according to

the advancement period,

such

as digital ways of gaining

knowledge

should

be utilize

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.

As a result

, they

keen

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to learn more and more.

Secondly

,

Government

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should order

the

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educational organizations to implement

equal

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curriculum system in

whole

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country. By doing

this

, students will be attentive to

learn

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and will not

be bore

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during learning.

Lastly

, workshops should be held by state

gor

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for

or

the mentors to improve their abilities so that they can play a vital role in learner's lives. In conclusion, in

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the

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light of above mentioned ideas government should act upon and make some different

legislations

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which could be a source of comfort and helpful during learning. I ardently believe that students will be eager to gain

knowledge

and not to leave education if the state

provide

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them facilities

according to

their environment.