You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the changing of tools that were used by humans in the Stone Age to cutting.
Overall
, there are two types of tools, which have different shapes from the
front
,
side
, and back views.
To begin
,
tool
A was used
in
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1.4 million years ago and has a different shape from
tool
B
used 0.8 million
year
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ago.
it is clear that
from the
front
view,
tool
B
much wider compared to A which has a thin shape.
Moreover
, the end of the upside in cutter
B
is sharper reflecting the peak of Everest mount rather than A which seems
such
as a pinnacle of a mountain. On the other views, from the
side
, cutter A is thicker but the back view
has
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is
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thinner similar to the
front
side
. the length of
thisi
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this
tool
is about 10 cm the same as
tool
B
.
However
, cutter
B
, from the
side
view has the thinest
side
and the back
much
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wider similar to its own
front
side
also
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words front, side, tool, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Stone Age
  • Cutting tools
  • Evolution
  • Flint
  • Chipping
  • Hand axe
  • Sharp edge
  • Craftsmanship
  • Hunting
  • Survival
  • Innovation
  • Cognitive abilities
  • Early humans
  • Technological advancements
  • Tool-making techniques
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