The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
This
diagram below shows us information about structure
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structures
that
is
used to generate Correct subject-verb agreement
are
electricity
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from
form
wave power
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from
Overall
the process involves a
apparatus Change the article
an
that is
mounted on the side of a cliff or sea wall. This
structure consists of a calm and turbine
. The apparatus consists a
large cubicle which available two Change preposition
of a
end
, one end is open to the sea and the other leads into a vertical column that Change to a plural noun
ends
open
to the Change the verb form
opens
air
. The turbine
that is
installed the
booth Change preposition
in the
this
used to generate the electricity
in two phases.
The first diagram indicates that when a wave apparatus the device, water is forced into the chamber, applying pressure on the air
within the column. This
air
escapes to atmosphere
through the Correct article usage
the atmosphere
turbine
, thereby producing electricity
.
The second diagram illustrates the next part of the process when wave
retreats. As the water level falls, the Correct article usage
the wave
air
from outside the column is sucked back in through the turbine
. As a result
, electricity
continues to be generated. The turbine
rotates only in one direction, regardless of the direction of the air flow
.Correct your spelling
airflow
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