The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
This
diagram below shows us information about
structure
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structures
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that
is
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are
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used to generate
electricity
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from
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form
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from
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wave power
Overall
the process involves
a
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an
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apparatus
that is
mounted on the side of a cliff or sea wall.
This
structure consists of a calm and
turbine
. The apparatus consists
a
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large cubicle which available two
end
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, one end is open to the sea and the other leads into a vertical column that
open
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to the
air
. The
turbine
that is
installed
the
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booth
this
used to generate the
electricity
in two phases. The first diagram indicates that when a wave apparatus the device, water is forced into the chamber, applying pressure on the
air
within the column.
This
air
escapes to
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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through the
turbine
, thereby producing
electricity
.
     The second diagram illustrates the next part of the process when
wave
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the wave
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retreats. As the water level falls, the
air
from outside the column is sucked back in through the
turbine
.
As a result
,
electricity
continues to be generated. The
turbine
rotates only in one direction, regardless of the direction of the
air flow
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airflow
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, turbine, air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wave power
  • Offshore
  • Kinetic energy
  • Renewable energy
  • Buoy
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Carbon footprint
  • Ecosystems
  • Sustainability
  • Energy portfolio
  • Scalability
  • Power grid
  • Marine environment
  • Economic viability
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