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The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
The
diagrams
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 provide a structure
that is
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 used to generate
electricity
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 from
wave
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 power.
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, there are 3 steps in
diagram
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 A and 3 steps in
diagram
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 B. The first step and
last
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 step for these
diagrams
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 are the same. In both
diagrams
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, there are columns on the sea wall and there is a
turbine
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 in these columns. In
the
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diagram
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 A, first of all,
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wave
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the wave
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 flows to the left by air which moves upward in the chamber. After that
wave
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 power gives
an
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energy to the
turbine
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 to rotate to the right. From
this
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, energy for the
electricity
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 is produced.
Diagram
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 B has
the
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a
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 similar structure, but there are some differences.
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, air comes to the columns downward and for that
wave
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 flows to another side. But
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turbine
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the turbine
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 always rotates
to
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 the same direction. The ways to gain
electricity
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 from
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turbine
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a turbine
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 are the same in both
diagrams
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. These are the two ways how to generate
electricity
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 from sea waves.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diagrams, electricity, wave, diagram, turbine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wave power
  • Offshore
  • Kinetic energy
  • Renewable energy
  • Buoy
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Carbon footprint
  • Ecosystems
  • Sustainability
  • Energy portfolio
  • Scalability
  • Power grid
  • Marine environment
  • Economic viability
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