The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
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The
diagrams
provide a structure
that is
used to generate
electricity
from
wave
power.
Overall
, there are 3 steps in
diagram
A and 3 steps in
diagram
B. The first step and
last
step for these
diagrams
are the same. In both
diagrams
, there are columns on the sea wall and there is a
turbine
in these columns. In
the
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diagram
A, first of all,
wave
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the wave
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flows to the left by air which moves upward in the chamber. After that
wave
power gives
an
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energy to the
turbine
to rotate to the right. From
this
, energy for the
electricity
is produced.
Diagram
B has
the
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similar structure, but there are some differences.
For example
, air comes to the columns downward and for that
wave
flows to another side. But
turbine
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always rotates
to
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the same direction. The ways to gain
electricity
from
turbine
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are the same in both
diagrams
. These are the two ways how to generate
electricity
from sea waves.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diagrams, electricity, wave, diagram, turbine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wave power
  • Offshore
  • Kinetic energy
  • Renewable energy
  • Buoy
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Carbon footprint
  • Ecosystems
  • Sustainability
  • Energy portfolio
  • Scalability
  • Power grid
  • Marine environment
  • Economic viability
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