The cost of air travel has fallen in recent years. Do you believe this is a positive or negative development? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, the reduction of air

travel

is notable. well, in

this

case,

although

there are some positive

impact

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but

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I mostly agree that, it exerts a great negative outcome on development because it gives access everyone to

travel

since it is cheap and

on the other hand

, it leads them to make less profit.

To begin

with, in terms of decreasing the

price

of tickets, air

plane

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planes

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became affordable for

people

from all

background

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backgrounds

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.

Therefore

, if anyone else gets a a chance to

travel

on it, the

possiblility

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possibility

of

accident

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increases.

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, if a

theif

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thief

has a purpose to steal on

a

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an

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airbus

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Airbus

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, they can easily do that

due to

the low

price

of it. There are various types of

people

, they can create

any

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apply

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unexpected incidence like robbery

,

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and can make the environment

unhygenic

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unhygienic

hygienic

since not all

people

are decent.

Secondly

, falling the

cost

of

an air

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air travel

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travel

can

built

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an unhealthy financial condition. since the

cost

is less, everyone will buy it

in

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at

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a very cheap

price

so the profit will not be the same.

Additionally

, The

price

range ensures a wealthy income

of

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for

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a flight company.

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, I

have

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visited

US

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the US

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in

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apply

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last

year, I noticed the ticket

cost

was

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dropped.

Then

immediately I let my friends know about

this

issue which ignited them to buy it. They ended up purchasing

becasue

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because

it was a great

oppurtunity

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opportunity

.

Moreover

, the

airbus

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Airbus

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company made a less earning.

Furthermore

, it has a positive influence on development despite having its negative sides.

For example

, if someone is very sick or in

emergency

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an emergency

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, he will

able

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be able

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to get on it

due to

the

cost

drop.

For example

, my friend's father had been suffering from cancer. so, their family wanted to take him abroad for

his

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better treatment but they were hopeless because the flight

price

was so expensive.

Suddently

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Suddenly

, the flight ticket became cheaper , they

finally

could go

as a result

.

To conclude

, if the

airplane

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aeroplane

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becomes cheaper,

it

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they

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can be contributed to many unwanted

situation

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since it allows to

travel

all

people

and reduces the income rate as well despite it

has

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having

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some positive

effect

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effects

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.

Finally

, it

exert

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mostly bad consequences in improvement.