the diagram illustrates the life cycle process of frogs in a pond.

The diagram illustrates how the

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grown up

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how they changed and how they birth their generations.

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, it is clearly seen that there are eleven processes to become an adult

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and the eggs are cultivated by the adult

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. In the beginning, the eggs are alternatives to embryos

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during the period of

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they become tadpoles with

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and cling to the water plants and eat them to survive. In the next

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we can obviously see that the tadpoles appear to have gills for breathing. In the next

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the

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keeps on growing and thick for easy swimming.

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, starting from

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is a big change because there are hindlegs appearing and the body

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is slightly changed to lights.

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they have other abilities that can store their food in the

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. After that the front legs pop up

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the

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becomes shorter and

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shifts to the young

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.

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eventually, when the

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is mature the transformation

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will end.