The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graphs illustrate the fluctuation in electrical tools possession and amount of duration doing house chores in a region from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the significant incline of the former is Linking Words
in contrast
with the latter, which experienced a notable plummet throughout the given period.
In terms of the first graph, Linking Words
refrigerator
started extremely low at just above zero before dramatically rising to 90 in 1960. Afterwards, it continued to slightly grow by 10% in 1980 and persisted until the Correct article usage
the refrigerator
last
observed Linking Words
year
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
washing
machine and vacuum cleaner stood fairly close at 40 and 30 respectively. Correct article usage
the washing
Furthermore
, vacuum Linking Words
cleaner
steadily Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
rise
and Wrong verb form
rose
reach
a peak at 100 in 2000 and remained the same until the Wrong verb form
reached
last
Linking Words
year
. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, after notably growing to 70% in 1960, washing Linking Words
machine
experienced a moderate fall to approximately 60% in 1980, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
hence
both categories Linking Words
converge
Wrong verb form
converged
at
in 1960. Change preposition
apply
Lastly
, it climbed back up and Linking Words
reach
a peak at just under 80% in the final Wrong verb form
reached
year
.
Regarding the second graph, the time spent Use synonyms
for
house chores Change preposition
on
initially
stood at 50 before constantly declining to about 15 in 1960 and Linking Words
centered
roughly around it in the following Change the spelling
centred
year
. Use synonyms
Finally
, it hit a trough at exactly 20 in the Linking Words
last
given period.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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