The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant." Write at least 150 words.

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The maps give information about the development that has taken place in Science

Park

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from 2018 to the present day.

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, the

park

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has been more developed with the changes in open lands, some buildings, and the introduction of some public facilities. To commence with, in the north, there was grassland, but it has disappeared and a research and development building has been erected on

this

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site with a connected path to the offices. Meanwhile, the reception

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has disappeared. Another noticeable change is that the cycling path has been built alongside the road, making it more cycling-friendly. The parking area, in the middle of the

park

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, has become smaller than in 2008. In the south, the IT centre has been converted into an innovative centre,

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the cyber security has been enlarged to the grassland beside the car

park

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, thereby the grassland has disappeared. To connect these three areas, paths have been

also

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developed. The

last

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striking developments are the introduction of a railway station in the south

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and a bus stop in the east.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

176 words

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