The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant." Write at least 150 words.
The maps give information about the development that has taken place in Science
Park
from 2018 to the present day. Overall
, the park
has been more developed with the changes in open lands, some buildings, and the introduction of some public facilities.
To commence with, in the north, there was grassland, but it has disappeared and a research and development building has been erected on this
site with a connected path to the offices. Meanwhile, the reception also
has disappeared. Another noticeable change is that the cycling path has been built alongside the road, making it more cycling-friendly. The parking area, in the middle of the park
, has become smaller than in 2008.
In the south, the IT centre has been converted into an innovative centre, while
the cyber security has been enlarged to the grassland beside the car park
, thereby the grassland has disappeared. To connect these three areas, paths have been also
developed. The last
striking developments are the introduction of a railway station in the south,
and a bus stop in the east.Remove the comma
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