The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. Agree or disagree
It is argued that the main goal of science should be to enhance the quality of
individual’s
Change noun form
individual
lives
. This
essay agrees that plays a major role in the day-to-day lives
of many. Firstly
, through research there has
been great advancements in the medical field; Change the verb form
have
secondly
, science has been a great contributor in
agriculture.
A lot of research has been dedicated to the curing and prevention of particular diseases. Change preposition
to
This
has led to a better understanding of these illnesses, as well as
, the discovery of new drugs and knowing which medicines to prescribe that could not only cure but possibly prevent resurgence of the sickness. For example
, through the development of vaccines, doctors were able to curb the Covid-19
pandemic saving numerous Correct your spelling
COVID-19
lives
in return.
Due to
certain environmental crises, many crops are lost per year leading to a food shortage. Thus
, time and energy was
spent by researchers to produce plants that may be able to withstand these harsh climate conditions. Change the verb form
were
For instance
, more farmers are investing in drought-resistant crops as they have a higher success rate in being harvested regardless of weather.
In conclusion, science has been very beneficial for people as the progress made has improved many lives
, such
as the discover
of medication and looking into different agricultural aspects to ensure that famines do not occur.Replace the word
discovery
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logical structure
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