The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of five reasons for
people
absenting at
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from
work
in a
mentioned country of Europe from 2000 to 2010.
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Overall
, it could be seen that illness and family duties were the main reasons for absenteeism, while
the opposite was true in the bar of stress. Moreover
, there were upward trends in the portions of people
not going to work
due to
stress, personal needs and unexpected problems.
To begin
with, there were nearly 45% of people
not going to work
because of illness, which was the highest percentage in the chart, however
declining by around 10% after 10 years. A similar trend could be seen in the second rank of percentages of individuals absenting
from the workplace for family responsibilities. In detail, Replace the word
absent
this
percentage started at over 25%, then
slightly decreased to 25% in the year 2005 and 2000.
Looking at the rest, the third rank of the reason why people
were not at work
was because of personal needs, contributing under 15% in the first year of the period, then
soaring by 10% in 2010. Stress, meanwhile, experienced a low growth, from roughly 5% to over 10% in 10 years. Finally
, an increase was witnessed in the figure for unexpected issues such
as transport or weather beginning at the level of around 10%, then
peaking at close to 15% before falling down at the end
of the period.Submitted by phuonglinhlp.0900 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, work with synonyms.
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