The graph below shows the number ofshops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below displays the statistics of shop openings and closures in an unspecified country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, there were more closed shops
than openings throughout the years, except in the years 2011 and 2015. Moreover
, the closest gap between the number
of closures and openings can be observed in 2014.
There was some degree of fluctuations observed in the direction of shop closures. The trend
started with slightly over 6,000 closed shops
in 2011, which then
showed volatility between 2012 to 2014 before plummeting to only around 500 closed chops in 2015. Afterwards, the trend
recovered and remained relatively constant until 2018.
On the other hand
, the line graph of the number
of new shops
experienced an overall
declining trend
. The number
peaked at 9,000 at the beginning of the trend
and experienced a plateau of around 4,000 new shops
opened per year from 2015 to 2017, before reaching the final number
of 3,000 new shopping establishments in 2018.Submitted by avianitad on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, number, trend with synonyms.
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