The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
In the line graph we can see the amount of the travellers in millions who visit the Caribbean island who spend their holidays on cruise ships or on the island from 2010 to 2017 separately and in total.
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, the level of the tourists in total icreased significantly over the whole period. In spite of Linking Words
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, the number of the visitors staying on the land or sailing fluctuated.
To start with, in 2010, the figure of the tourists equaled 1 Linking Words
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, the next 6 years, a gradual upward trend is represented. From 2016 to 2017, we observe a sharp growth. By the end of the period the amount of the visitors reached 3.5 Linking Words
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In the beginning the tavellers prefer cruise journeys more than spending time on the island (about 0.7 Use synonyms
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, between 2015 and 2016, the number of the sailing Linking Words
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choosing ships was upper than those who prefer staying on the land.Use synonyms
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