The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.
The table shows information about the most reported living
issues
for people that
living in UK Correct pronoun usage
apply
cities
in 2018. Overall
, the biggest problem in each cities
was health services, Change to a singular noun
city
then
in the second place was education and training. Then
, the fewest problems was
from Change the verb form
were
the
Correct article usage
apply
air
pollution.
It is reported that the percentages
of health services issues
dominated in the whole cities
in UK
, the biggest Correct article usage
the UK
percentages
hit on Belfast and Cardiff about more than a half percentages
of the whole issues
. Then
, the next place was education and training. There were not any significant differences in each cities
, but the biggest Change to a singular noun
city
percentages
goes
to Glasgow and London, they approximately hit more than a half from the living Change the verb form
go
issues
.
Moreover
, the least
Correct word choice
biggest
issues
that had been going Fix the agreement mistake
issue
in
each Change preposition
on in
cities
was Change to a singular noun
city
air
polution
. The cleanest Correct your spelling
pollution
air
quality in UK
was in Newcastle since they only hit less than ten Correct article usage
the UK
percents
from all Fix the agreement mistake
percent
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
issues
. However
, Manchester clearly had air
pollution because it is reported that they hit more than ten percents
of the Fix the agreement mistake
percent
all over
problems.Add a hyphen
all-over
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Vocabulary: Replace the words issues, cities, air, percentages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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