The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.
The table shows information about the most reported living
issues
for people
that
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living in UK
cities
in 2018.
Overall
, the biggest problem in each
cities
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city
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was health services,
then
in the second place was education and training.
Then
, the fewest problems
was
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from
the
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air
pollution. It is reported that the
percentages
of health services
issues
dominated in the whole
cities
in
UK
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the UK
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, the biggest
percentages
hit on Belfast and Cardiff about more than a half
percentages
of the whole
issues
.
Then
, the next place was education and training. There were not any significant differences in each
cities
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city
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, but the biggest
percentages
goes
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go
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to Glasgow and London, they approximately hit more than a half from the living
issues
.
Moreover
, the
least
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biggest
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issues
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issue
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that had been going
in
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on in
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each
cities
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city
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was
air
polution
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pollution
. The cleanest
air
quality in
UK
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the UK
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was in Newcastle since they only hit less than ten
percents
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percent
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from all
type
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types
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of
issues
.
However
, Manchester clearly had
air
pollution because it is reported that they hit more than ten
percents
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percent
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of the
all over
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problems.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words issues, cities, air, percentages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • affordable housing
  • urban areas
  • overcrowding
  • homelessness
  • traffic congestion
  • car ownership
  • public transportation systems
  • commuting times
  • air pollution
  • industrial activities
  • air quality
  • green spaces
  • urbanization
  • mental health
  • crime rates
  • socio-economic factors
  • sense of security
  • waste management
  • waste disposal
  • recycling
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