All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

In recent times, most people

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dealing with obesity worldwide. The statistics illustrate that the number of people who are affected by

this

has increased significantly and these individuals can be at any age.

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essay will look at

causes

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the causes

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of

this

and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is that many people nowadays eat junk food and prepared food. Despite these kinds of food

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delicious, they contain a lot of sugar, salt and oil which can cause

another diseases

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in

human

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body. Fast foods

such

as fried chicken or pizza and chips are clear-cut examples of them. The solution is for the government to raise taxes

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them which could be an effective way to decrease overweigh problems. Another problem is that working out has become less common than before. Yet, the prices are super expensive, and

moreover

, it is the most difficult task. The way forward can be to do work out on a daily basis which makes your body fit and

also

more energetic, despite the prices. Sports

such

as

body building

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bodybuilding

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and swimming are popular and they are recommended by doctors these days. A third reason which leads to

overweigh

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overweight

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is related to genetics.

These kind

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of humans face

this

disease

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an early

ages

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which they have inherited from their family. In the US,

for instance

, about 30 per cent of the society

are

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coping with

this

according to

the news. To tackle

this

issue, they have to refer to the doctors in order to recommend some pills or surgery. In conclusion, obesity has become more epidemic these days and the reasons can be

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diet,

exercises

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exercise

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or

genetic

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genetically

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related,

however

, there are some effective ways to prevent

this

. In my viewpoint, governments should take

an actions

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actions

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such

as advertising healthy diets and gyms which may encourage them and

also

raise awareness.