The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park secondary school since it's construction in 1950. Summarise the information and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent 1950 Main road Houses school Farmland playground 1980 Main road Car park science block school Sports field play ground 2010 Main road Car park science block school Sports field play ground
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The given maps illustrate the changes of West Park Secondary
School
in three different years. The years were divided into 1950, 1980, and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there was a major development of facilities surrounding the school
and houses
were removed.
As the maps show, in 1950, houses
and school
buildings was
located to the south of the main road. Change the verb form
were
Subsequently
, the was farmland behind houses
and a playground after school
. In 1980, a car park and science block were constructed at the expense of houses
, with the science block adjacent to the school
. Moreover
, the farmland has been replaced with sports fields.
In the last
year, 2010, the carpark was extended to the south by removing the sports field. Meanwhile, the sports field was relocated to the east using the third part of the playground area. Lastly
, the school
building and the science block remain unchanged.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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