The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The charts give information about a comparison of different kinds of earned income in several cities, in the
UK
. Overall
, it can be seen that London had the highest amount of money received followed by Cambridge. Cities in Scotland have a low average salary compared to England.
According to
the data, the largest amount of money received by workers was found in London the capital city of the UK
just over 34,000 pounds sterling. The second place is Cambridge with considerable salaries at 29.854 pounds sterling. There is no significant gap between Bristol and Edinburg ,Scotland between 27.828 and 27.592.
In terms of the third lowest income in the UK
, Glasgow, Manchester and Birmingham. There is not much difference of amount money received in Glasgow and Manchester between 26.250 and 25.909 respectively. Lastly
, the remaining city is Birmingham which has the lowest income in the UK
around 25.531.Submitted by sintakristiani22 on
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