The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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households
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the number
housework
per week, per household during the period of 1920 to 2019 in a particular country.According to
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machines
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refrigerator
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vacuum
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.
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overall
perspective, it is apparent that there was a dramatic increase in the proportion of households
who owned electrical appliances from 1920 to 2019, on the
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every week’s
housework
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for each household experienced a relatively steady decline during the same time.There is Wrong verb form
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refrigerators
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reached a bottom of 0% in 1920, but the situation totally Fix the agreement mistake
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became the most popular electric machine
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the washing
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place.
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,initially
, the most popular electric appliance in 1920 was washing
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a washing
machine
(40%), followed by vacuum
cleaner(30%).Correct article usage
a vacuum
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households
were willing to choose it.Subsequently
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refrigerators
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soared by 30% and 20%.What is more, they all peaked at 100% and remained unchanged between 2000 and 2019, which left washing Correct your spelling
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had a temporary drop from 1960 to 1980 by 10 Correct pronoun usage
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dramatic
refrigerator
families took place during the decades(1920-1960),it kept increasing and eventually reached the peak of 100% in 1980 and remained unfluctuating in flowing 39 years.
In the second chart
, the decade(1920-1960) witnessed a sharp decline in the amount of time spent doing housework
for a week in households
from 50% to 20%, in the next 59 years(1960-2019), the number of hours of housework
kept a relatively slight fall and reached a bottom of about 10% in 2019.Submitted by 1320493878 on
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