The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart given compares the surge of
world's
Correct article usage
the world's
population
in certain highly populated cities. From the general overview, it can be seen there was a significant increase each of years.
Starting with the year 1970 where
the birth rate was the lowest, Tokyo became the topmost Correct word choice
when
population
growth with approximately 15 million
citizens live
there followed by New York and Shanghai where those two cities had more than 10 Wrong verb form
living
million
of
citizens. On the other side, Bombay citizens were only 5 Change preposition
apply
million
and
followed Correct word choice
apply
with
Jakarta which was half of total Bombay's Change preposition
by
population
.
Moreover
, while
the majority of cities showed a big growth of
total Change preposition
in
population
, New York
numbers did not rise significantly which only showed less than 5 Change noun form
York's
millions
from 1970 to 2010. More than that, Tokyo still had the highest Change to singular
million
population
even in 2010 with more than 25 million
of
folks Change preposition
apply
along side
Correct your spelling
alongside
to
Bombay which nearly shared Change preposition
apply
exact
same numbers. Correct article usage
the exact
Furthermore
, Jakarta grew remarkably from less than 5 million
in 1970 to more than 5 millions
per Change to singular
million
years
which showed its peak in 2010 with almost 20 Fix the agreement mistake
year
milion
of individuals.Correct your spelling
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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