The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates
proportion
of the police Add an article
the proportion
budget
from which the money came, and both Use synonyms
of
pie charts Change preposition
apply
decribed
how the money was allocated. Correct your spelling
described
describe
There
was conducted between 2017 and 2018 in a Britain region. Correct pronoun usage
It
Overall
, There was Linking Words
increasing
trend in all three sectors Add an article
an increasing
while
the Linking Words
budget
was mostly spent on wages.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, National Linking Words
Governmet
had been the largest contributor compared to Correct your spelling
government
others
categories, with 175.5 Correct quantifier usage
other
million
pounds in 2017 and rising to 177.8 Use synonyms
million
pounds in 2018. The number was followed by Local Taxes at 91.2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017 and rose Use synonyms
sunstantialy
to 102.3 Correct your spelling
substantially
million
a year later. Use synonyms
Hence
, the financial support from Other Sources was the lowest with 38 Linking Words
million
in 2017 and a small increase to 38.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2018.
In Use synonyms
term
of how the Fix the agreement mistake
terms
budget
Use synonyms
allocated
, the main of the police Add a missing verb
is allocated
budget
went to salaries for officers Use synonyms
nd
staff, and it dropped from 75% in 2017 to 64% in 2018. As for the money allocated Correct your spelling
and
building
and Transport depicted stable at 17% each year. Change preposition
to building
Linking Words
Also
a Add a comma
Also,
differenct
pattern could be seen in the category of Correct your spelling
different
tecnology
where the figure went up sharply from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018 which was the smallest symmetry in the given period.Correct your spelling
technology
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, million with synonyms.
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