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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
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The graph indicates the global
water
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 usage in the discrete three fields which are domestic, industrial, and agricultural from 1900 to 2000
whereas
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 the table below represents the main characters related to drink consumption like population, the magnitude of irrigated land, and
average
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the average
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water
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 amount consumed by a person in Brazil and Democratic Republic of
Congo
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(as referred to
Congo
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 hereinafter) in 2000. One of the most noticeable parts of the graph is that global use of rain has soared steadily regardless of the sector and farming is constantly the main factor in using
water
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 across the world. Looking at the charts more closely, in 1900, agricultural irrigation needed 500
water
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 despite
water
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 usage for other purposes was nearly zero.
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, in 2000, the amount of
water
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 consumed in the farming industry reached above 3000 and industrial use and domestic use went up to 1400 and 500, respectively.
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, the population of Brazil was about 35 times that of
Congo
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 and the square of irrigated land was 265 times that of
Congo
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 in 2000, which caused a Brazilian to consume more
water
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 than a citizen of
Congo
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. Specifically, 359 was used up by a person in Brazil though only 8 was consumed by a person in
Congo
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 at the same time.
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