The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the percentage of
Australia
students Correct your spelling
Australian
that
Correct pronoun usage
who
finish
study in secondary school who got a job, are unemployed and Wrong verb form
finished
continue
learning in three time periods, 1980, 1990, Wrong verb form
continued
2000
.
Correct word choice
and 2000
Overall
, it is clear that
graduates in 1980 accounted for the highest number of higher education. The number of students got
a job slightly increased each year.
Correct pronoun usage
who got
According to
the data, continued to
study was the main trend in 1980 with half of the total number. Big gap compared with 38 Verb problem
apply
percent
in 1980 and 37 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2000. Change the spelling
per cent
then
dropped to 38 percent
in the next 10 years . What’s more, those who got a job were two-fifthsChange the spelling
per cent
,
and grew gradually to 50 Remove the comma
apply
percent
and 55 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively in 1980 and 2000.
As regards remaining data, pupils who were jobless made up Change the spelling
per cent
for
8 Change preposition
apply
percent
in 2000, which was lower than the same figure in 1980. Graduates out of work occupied 10 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and increased a mere 2 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the year 1980 Change the spelling
per cent
then
witnessed a reduction in 2000 and stayed at 8 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
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