"The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant." Write at least 150 words.
The maps compare the improvement of a Science park in 2008 and today.
Overall
, the massive changes in green areas, public facilities, and research buildings can be seen.
Initially
, the wide Grassland
located
Add a missing verb
is located
on
the northwest Change preposition
in
area
, and to the east of Grassland
has
been offices and a reception in which the latter has been altered to Wrong verb form
there have
university
hub. Correct article usage
a university
However
, all Grassland
area
disappeared Fix the agreement mistake
areas
in
Change preposition
apply
which
Research and development Correct pronoun usage
apply
has
been erected, and a pathway has been added to reach each building. Interestingly, two big threes Change the verb form
have
are still existed
. Change to the active voice
still exist
have still existed
Furthermore
, a grassland
on
the east Change preposition
in
area
disappeared as well, whereas
it has been built a big cyber security, but has reduce
the car park Change the verb form
reduced
area
, located in the middle area
. Bus
stop Add an article
The bus
has been
located to the east of cyber security.
For business units building and three Wrong verb form
is
area
which Change to a plural noun
areas
has
been located on the west and southwest, respectively, are still Correct subject-verb agreement
have
remined
. Correct your spelling
remained
reminded
However
, it center
to the east of the three Change the spelling
centre
area
Change to a plural noun
areas
demolished
and it has been used Add a missing verb
was demolished
for
Change preposition
as
innovation
Correct article usage
an innovation
center
. To the south of the business units has been added cycle path Change the spelling
centre
along
. The station Wrong verb form
has been
also
has been erected on
the south Change preposition
in
area
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grassland, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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