The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change n each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The chart compares the value of different groups of goods in terms of expertise between 2015 and 2016,
while
the table illustrates how much each group of these cargoes has changed during this
period.
Overall
, the amount of petroleum products had the highest value among all goods, and all categories had increased except for gem and jewellery products.
As can be seen from the bar chart, petroleum ranked at the first place and measured in 60 billion
in 2015, experiencing a rise of around 3, 3 billion
in 2016. Followed by, engineered goods at second place, accounting for 56 billion
in 2015 and had an upward trend of 8.5, which received over 60 billion
in 2016.
Regarding the other categories, gems and jewellery stood at over 40 billion
, however
, it witnessed a fell
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by
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at
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billion
. While
agricultural products had a low margin of change, textiles saw the most significant increase in value by 15.24, and its figure was the least profitable category of exports.Submitted by soltaninejad_sahel on
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