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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#people #habit #books #person
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It is argued that among people that reading is always useful,
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 others tend to suppose that it varies depending on the
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 content.
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 reading is often suggested as a perfect habit, in my opinion, certain
books
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 could have a negative impact on human beings’
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 and life in general. Current technology opportunities provide us with any source and type of information,
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 reading
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 is still common. Reading opens access to incredible amounts of information and knowledge
that've
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that's
 been recorded. Reading has
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 been shown to be protective of cognitive function as you get older. I would like to point out that it is completely true that movies, songs, or
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books
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 do the same exact thing as
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, but it is easier to consume a
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 and sink in it than it is in a movie or a tv show. In visual media, things go with a flow you don't really get enough time to ponder over your own thoughts unless it is a well-directed movie. But
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, reading a
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 gives you
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 control over how you want to perceive it. What you read affects you, but for how long that completely depends on who is reading the
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. I think it depends on how sensitive a person is, if he/she is very sensitive the
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 will affect him/her on a long-term basis, but
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 if he/she is downright practical and logical, the
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 will be enjoyed as a
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 only. No doubt it will affect the mind but for a very short period. In conclusion, the habit of reading is one of the best qualities that a person can possess.
Books
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 are known to be your best friend for a reason. So, it is very important to develop good reading habits.
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Task Achievement
To improve task achievement, aim to provide a balance between discussing both views before giving your own opinion. Make sure your opinion is clear throughout the essay and supported by relevant examples.
Coherence and Cohesion
For a higher score in coherence and cohesion, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, with clear topic sentences and logical sequence of ideas. Use cohesive devices appropriately to link ideas and paragraphs.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mental stimulation
  • knowledge acquisition
  • vocabulary expansion
  • stress reduction
  • memory improvement
  • analytical thinking
  • empathy
  • emotional intelligence
  • social cues
  • constructive content
  • morally uplifting
  • misinformation
  • harmful ideologies
  • critical reading skills
  • credible sources
  • inherently good habit
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