The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
An island is described on maps, and some visitor facilities are added to that place.
The diagrams illustrate the condition of an island before and after manufacturing of different basic requirements
such
as,
reception area, cottages, tracks, paths and so on. Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, the place consists of 100 meters.
The first figure mentions the situation of an island which only contains a beach or some bamboo trees. But in the second one, there is the development of various luxuries for tourists. There is also
availability
of yachts by which they have access to the bridgeAdd an article
the availability
,
and is attached to the seashore.
Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, motor vehicle tracks are built which surround the reception building and leads
toward the restaurant.
Correct subject-verb agreement
lead
Moreover
, basic requirements of rooms are also
fulfilled where they can spend time to get some rest. While
,
paths are formed throughout the accommodation area and Remove the comma
apply
then
it brings toward the beach. Swimming spots os
Correct your spelling
is
also
available at Beach Point.Submitted by livelygirl127 on
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