Childcare is important. Both parents should attend childcare courses To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Taking

care

of

child

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is a really relevant topic for

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our

society. Nowadays, there are

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available

a lot of courses to study on how to

care

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child

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and

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people believe that doing

this

is important for those who want to be

parents

. As I strongly agree with

this

point of view,

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discuss

some reasons for that.

Firstly

, childcare is important because the

child

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children

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of today are going to be the adults in the future, so kids are a relevant part of

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our

society. The education and

care

that young people

receives

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receive

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in

the

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childhood are

determinant

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determinants

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for

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of

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there

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their

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lives.

Thus

, the

parents

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care

can affect

there

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their

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charecter

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character

and

behaivors

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behaviours

behaviour

in the long term.

For example

,

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psychology

already knows that almost

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that a person has

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begins

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begin

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with a trigger of something that

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happened

in childhood or with the

parents

.

Secondly

, I believe that

parents

should attend

to

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courses to learn the best practices of childcare.

Because

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doing

this

kind of

classes

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, the mother and the father will know how to lead diverse types of questions unknown

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and will give medical,

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psychological

an

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and

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scientific

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assessments

to choose the best

pratices

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practices

for it.

For instance

, is important to know the best age to introduce some foods or the best age to

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allow

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the kids

watching

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to watch

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TV.

Moreover

, it is important to highlight that both the mother and the father

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should

could

do the course.

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common to see the belief that only the mother needs to study

about

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apply

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paternality

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paternalism

paternity

paternally

, but both

parents

have

responsability

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responsibility

to

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the

sons

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son's

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education.

To conclude

, childcare is a very important subject, as it has a big influence

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the future life of the kids and courses of

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childcare

should be a normal

atitude

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attitude

altitude

aptitude

for both

parents

to

garantee

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guarantee

the best practices.