Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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above discuss whether
professionals
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like doctors and engineers should be required to
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in the country where they learned their education or can freely
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anywhere. I strongly believe that expert should be free to choose where they would like to
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regardless of where they acquired all their knowledge.
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, as
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, all of the basic learning materials are already structured and internationally standardised.
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as
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, wherever a person tries to learn to be a
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, he/she will find out that their basic materials across the world are the same. They will learn about physiology, nerves, brain, heart, digestive system, and so on.
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is why, no matter where a
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is learning from, they always become a
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everywhere across the
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. Like when there is an emergency situation in a flying aeroplane, the pilot always trusts
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there is a
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inside that plane to help (
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indicates that a
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will be forever a
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everywhere)
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,
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doctors, engineers
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face similar conditions. Usually, we find engineers
work
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in industrial sites or plants and they have specialisation in specific areas of expertise. An engineer should be able to do his/her job no matter where it is.
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, a general
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engineer in the US should
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be able to conduct the same
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in Albania under the condition that the
machine
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should be the same. Unless the
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is very specific and only a certified person can operate it,
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the engineer needs to acquire some certifications to be able to operate that
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. But
this
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won't affect my opinion that they still can freely choose where country they want to
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. In a nutshell, my belief is strong that
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can
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anywhere
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they wish. There is no hesitation that their origin country where they did their learning can bind them to stay. Unless other countries need very specific certifications,
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professionals
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must obey them
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Task Achievement
The essay covers the topic and provides an opinion as required, but it could improve by discussing both sides of the argument more evenly. Ensure that both views are given equal consideration and depth in the discussion.
Coherence & Cohesion
The essay has a logical structure, but transitions between ideas could be smoother. Use linking words and phrases to aid the flow of ideas and create better connections between paragraphs.
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Provide specific examples to support your arguments. Personal opinions are valuable, but the essay would benefit from real-world cases and evidence to illustrate points made.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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