Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Given
views
above discuss whether Correct article usage
the views
professionals
like doctors and engineers should be required to Use synonyms
work
in the country where they learned their education or can freely Use synonyms
work
anywhere. I strongly believe that expert should be free to choose where they would like to Use synonyms
work
regardless of where they acquired all their knowledge.
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Firstly
, as Linking Words
professionals
, all of the basic learning materials are already structured and internationally standardised. Use synonyms
Such
as Linking Words
doctor
, wherever a person tries to learn to be a Use synonyms
doctor
, he/she will find out that their basic materials across the world are the same. They will learn about physiology, nerves, brain, heart, digestive system, and so on. Use synonyms
This
is why, no matter where a Linking Words
doctor
is learning from, they always become a Use synonyms
doctor
everywhere across the Use synonyms
countries
. Like when there is an emergency situation in a flying aeroplane, the pilot always trusts Fix the agreement mistake
country
if
there is a Correct word choice
that
doctor
inside that plane to help (Use synonyms
this
indicates that a Linking Words
doctor
will be forever a Use synonyms
doctor
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in
everywhere)
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apply
Secondly
, Linking Words
besides
doctors, engineers Linking Words
also
face similar conditions. Usually, we find engineers Linking Words
work
in industrial sites or plants and they have specialisation in specific areas of expertise. An engineer should be able to do his/her job no matter where it is. Use synonyms
For example
, a general Linking Words
machine
engineer in the US should Use synonyms
also
be able to conduct the same Linking Words
work
in Albania under the condition that the Use synonyms
machine
should be the same. Unless the Use synonyms
machine
is very specific and only a certified person can operate it, Use synonyms
then
the engineer needs to acquire some certifications to be able to operate that Linking Words
machine
. But Use synonyms
this
won't affect my opinion that they still can freely choose where country they want to Linking Words
work
.
In a nutshell, my belief is strong that Use synonyms
professionals
can Use synonyms
work
anywhere Use synonyms
as
they wish. There is no hesitation that their origin country where they did their learning can bind them to stay. Unless other countries need very specific certifications, Correct word choice
apply
then
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professionals
must obey themUse synonyms
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