Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Given
views
above discuss whether Correct article usage
the views
professionals
like doctors and engineers should be required to work
in the country where they learned their education or can freely work
anywhere. I strongly believe that expert should be free to choose where they would like to work
regardless of where they acquired all their knowledge.
Firstly
, as professionals
, all of the basic learning materials are already structured and internationally standardised. Such
as doctor
, wherever a person tries to learn to be a doctor
, he/she will find out that their basic materials across the world are the same. They will learn about physiology, nerves, brain, heart, digestive system, and so on. This
is why, no matter where a doctor
is learning from, they always become a doctor
everywhere across the countries
. Like when there is an emergency situation in a flying aeroplane, the pilot always trusts Fix the agreement mistake
country
if
there is a Correct word choice
that
doctor
inside that plane to help (this
indicates that a doctor
will be forever a doctor
in
everywhere)
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Secondly
, besides
doctors, engineers also
face similar conditions. Usually, we find engineers work
in industrial sites or plants and they have specialisation in specific areas of expertise. An engineer should be able to do his/her job no matter where it is. For example
, a general machine
engineer in the US should also
be able to conduct the same work
in Albania under the condition that the machine
should be the same. Unless the machine
is very specific and only a certified person can operate it, then
the engineer needs to acquire some certifications to be able to operate that machine
. But this
won't affect my opinion that they still can freely choose where country they want to work
.
In a nutshell, my belief is strong that professionals
can work
anywhere as
they wish. There is no hesitation that their origin country where they did their learning can bind them to stay. Unless other countries need very specific certifications, Correct word choice
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then
professionals
must obey themSubmitted by aghnia.ulhaq on
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