he tables above demonstrate the number of international students. Compare them

he tables above demonstrate the number of international students. Compare them
IELTS Writing Task Chart for he tables above demonstrate the number of international students. Compare them
The tables above demonstrate the
number
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of international
students
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who study in
Canada
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and in the
USA
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based on the country of origin between 2002 and 2003. In
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Canada
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Canada,
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the most significant change occurred
within
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among
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Chinese
students
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, as their
number
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increased by 45%
accordingly
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. Closely following the Chinese
students
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, the proportion of
Indian
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students
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also
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had grown by 35% in one year. The smallest percentage change can be mentioned among
students
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of
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in
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the
USA
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, just
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a 9
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% increase. The proportion of
students
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in the
USA
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is noticeably higher than in
Canada
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.
However
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, the change in
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number
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a number
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of
Indian
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students
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in
Canada
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was significantly higher (up to 35%)
while
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total
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a total
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number
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of
Indian
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students
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in the
USA
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was ten times higher. The only reduction from 2002 to 2003 among the
students
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, studying in the
USA
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was among
Indian
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origin
as well as
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.
By contrast
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, the
number
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of American
students
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in
Canada
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went up by approximately six times rather than Canadian
students
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in the
USA
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accordingly
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.
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Overall
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The overall
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difference between
Canada
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and the
USA
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is dramatically different.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, canada, usa, indian with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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