Do you think young people are better than older people to make good leaders? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some
people
assert that
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the younger
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generation are
more
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better individuals in employing more
experts
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workers in their companies and organizations
while
,
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others believe that
older
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the older
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generation
hve
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has
more
experinece
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experience
in order to make
people
capable
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their own
businees
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businesses
.
However
, I
gree
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with the former one because of
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ability and their age. On the one hand, as we live in the cutting edge world
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is vitally necessary to be able to follow professional
people
through their social platforms. In
the
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modern
society
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the importance of knowing technology and being knowledgeable has become significantly the main reason for
being keep
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in contact with
profecional
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professional
society.
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to say, it is more likely that
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young individuals based on their ages are able to evaluate
potential
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their potential
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ability to implement
people
to their
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so that become
qualified
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a qualified
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person
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people
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.
moreover
, technology has
revolusionized
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revolutionised
the way of communication which plays a crucial role in gaining relevant information in an effort to
being
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more experts and detecting skills that would be become
people
better leader.
that is
to say,
i
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do
beliveve
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believe
that, the most important
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feature
features
to
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being
leader
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a leader
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is being
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a tallented
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tallented
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talented
and gifted person.
although
some
people
born
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with some natural
skiils
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skills
, obtaining information and working on
sliis
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skills
and personal
progrees
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progress
is more important which
need
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needs
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to have good
leadrs
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leaders
leads
in terms of recognising abilities and
then
improving them. Young
people
mostly
has
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have
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a competetive
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competetive
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competitive
nature which
result
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results
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in
studing
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studying
more about how they can make good leaders who can
countribute
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contribute
to being successful and
being stay
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staying
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ahead of other companies.
Therefore
, they mainly tend to struggle with the ways that can
be become
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make
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their business more prosperous.
for example
, they are willing to work in
such
environment
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an environment
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which might improve their skills and become the best version of themselves. In conclusion, I do believe that
,
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young
people
are more capable
to make
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of making
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qualified leaders in comparison to adults because of their nature and their ability.
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