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The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.

The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
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This
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elaborate
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the
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 high school
teachers
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teachers'
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salaries
 in five countries which are
Astralia
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Australia
, Denmark, Luxembourg,
Korea
, and
Jaban
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Japan
.
Overall
, Luxembourg and
korea
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Korea
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teachers
 have the highest maximum
salaries
,
while
Austalia
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Australia
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 has the lowest maximum
salaries
.
Although
 Denmark and Australia have lower
years
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 salary,
but
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Korea
 takes
alot
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a lot
 of
years
 to reach
top
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the top
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 salary
mare
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more
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 than all
years
.
First,
Australia
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Australian
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teachers
starting
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 with 34,600 and
then
 after 15
years
 raised their
salaries
 to 48,00 less than Denmark
teachers
 who started with 47,000 and after 15
years
 they raised to 54,000. they both take
same
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years
 to raise the maximum salary.
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,
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luxembourg
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Luxembourg
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 take the
highst
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highest
 of the money
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 139,000 as
maximum
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,
then
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comes
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Korea
by
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 84,500, the Jaban by 62,400.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers, salaries, korea, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net income
  • cost of living
  • purchasing power parity (PPP)
  • economic indicators
  • wage disparity
  • median wage
  • livable wage
  • compensation package
  • inflation rate
  • educational funding
  • professional development
  • currency exchange rates
  • teacher retention
  • standard of living
  • qualifications
  • experience level
  • tenure
  • collective bargaining
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