in today's world many people own a smarrtphonedo you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweight the disadvantages
Nowadays,
almost
people are used to Correct your spelling
most
smartphones
. Because Use synonyms
smartphones
an essential human objects for communication and work. Use synonyms
But
spending a large amount of time using a smartphone can lead to health problems. Correct word choice
However
This
essay will discuss Linking Words
its
advantages and the advantages of Change the word
the
this
problem.
On the one hand, Linking Words
smartphones
help us search Use synonyms
everything
which we find. Change preposition
for everything
Moreover
, it helps us in our work Linking Words
such
as contact, chat, and email to support our work. Teenagers can learn many things regarding their studies. Linking Words
For example
, we can relax on the smartphone after a day of studying and working. Linking Words
Due to
we have positive energy in the afternoon.
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On the other hand
, there are some teenagers Linking Words
such
as students are play games Linking Words
instead
of studying. Linking Words
Besides
, studying is getting worse and worse, Linking Words
sometimes
I don't want to study. They spend time on Correct word choice
and sometimes
smartphones
playing games which increases health diseases Use synonyms
such
as obesity, Linking Words
Correct word choice
and eyes
eyes
problems.
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eye
To
conclusion, everybody has a mobile phone. It has advantages Change preposition
In
such
as providing information to the students regarding studies. It has Linking Words
also
many disadvantages Linking Words
such
as using an excess mobile phone can lead to obesity. So we should allocate reasonable time between watching the phone and working.Linking Words
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