Some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A number of

people

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give their opinion that marketing brings positive economic influences, at the same time, another group of

people

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think it exerts negative social impacts because not everyone is happy with their position and what they have. In

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case, I think, it has some good effects on

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growth because

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advertisment

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advertising

helps to grab

customers

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customers'

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attention

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can be a good reason

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making a good profit

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people

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may get depressed to see the product because they do not have it.

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essay explores

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both sides of

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advertisment

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advertising

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with, in terms of attracting

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interest, advertisements play a significant role.

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, if a person gets to know about a product, she will buy it to try and that assists a company to make a good income.

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, I use skincare products. If I get in touch with a new one through

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an advertisment

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advertisment

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Consumer spending
Economic growth
Brand awareness
Market competition
Innovation
Employment opportunities
Tax revenues
Unrealistic expectations
Idealized lifestyle
Dissatisfaction
Harmful stereotypes
Manipulative tactics
Psychological impacts
Ethical standards
Responsible consumer behavior

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Some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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