The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables
shows
about Change the verb form
show
weather
, especially the temperatures and the time of sunrise and sunset in the capital city of Add an article
the weather
UK
and Australia in December 2018.
Correct article usage
the UK
overall
, London
has lower temperature
and short daylight Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
while
Sydney
has higher temperature
and long daylight. The Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
temperature
unit was in degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celcius
.
On Friday 28th, Correct your spelling
celsius
london
has
the lowest Wrong verb form
had
temperature
, it was 4 degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celcius
and Change the capitalization
Celcius
maximum
Correct article usage
the maximum
temperature
was 9 degree
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degrees
celcius
, different from Change the capitalization
Celcius
sydney
which has a gap up to 9 Change the capitalization
Sydney
degree
Change to a plural noun
degrees
which
the maximum was Correct word choice
where
at
26 Change preposition
apply
degree
and Change to a plural noun
degrees
minimum
at 17 Correct article usage
the minimum
degree
. In the following two days, Change to a plural noun
degrees
London
was 13 and 10 degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
fro
maximum Correct your spelling
for
temperture
and 3 and 5 Correct your spelling
temperature
temperatures
degree
Change to a plural noun
degrees
in
minimum. Change preposition
at
Sydney
has 28 degree
and 31 Change to a plural noun
degrees
degree
which is the highest Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
temperature
of the last
three days and the minimum was at 18 and 19 degree
.
Sunrise in Change to a plural noun
degrees
London
started at 8.05 a.m
, and increased one
Change preposition
by one
minutes
only in the next two days, Change to a singular noun
minute
while
sunset was a 3.57 p.m
. and plus 1 minutes
each day. Change to a singular noun
minute
Sydney
was more early
for sunrise, it was at 5.45 Correct word choice
earlier
a.
Correct your spelling
a.m.
m
for
Friday and Saturday, Change preposition
on
while
Sunday
at 5.46. Sunset in Change preposition
on Sunday
Sydney
was at 8.06 p.m
. on Friday, and 8.07 p.m
. on Saturday and sunday
.Change the capitalization
Sunday
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