The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables

shows

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about

weather

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the weather

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, especially the temperatures and the time of sunrise and sunset in the capital city of

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the UK

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and Australia in December 2018.

overall

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London

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has lower

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temperature

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temperatures

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and short daylight

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Sydney

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has higher

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temperature

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temperatures

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and long daylight. The

temperature

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unit was in

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degree

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degrees

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celcius

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celsius

. On Friday 28th,

london

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has

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the lowest

temperature

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, it was 4

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degree

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degrees

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celcius

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and

maximum

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the maximum

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temperature

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was 9

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degree

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degrees

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celcius

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, different from

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sydney

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Sydney

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which has a gap up to 9

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degree

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degrees

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which

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where

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the maximum was

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apply

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degree

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degrees

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and

minimum

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the minimum

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at 17

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degree

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. In the following two days,

London

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was 13 and 10

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degree

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degrees

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fro

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for

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maximum

temperture

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temperature

temperatures

and 3 and 5

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degree

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degrees

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minimum.

Sydney

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has 28

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degree

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degrees

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and 31

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degree

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degrees

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which is the highest

temperature

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of the

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three days and the minimum was at 18 and 19

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degree

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. Sunrise in

London

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started at 8.05 a.

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, and increased

one

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by one

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minutes

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only in the next two days,

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sunset was a 3.57 p.

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. and plus 1

minutes

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each day.

Sydney

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was

more early

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earlier

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for sunrise, it was at 5.45

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a.m.

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for

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Friday and Saturday,

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Sunday

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on Sunday

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at 5.46. Sunset in

Sydney

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was at 8.06 p.

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. on Friday, and 8.07 p.

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. on Saturday and

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, temperature, sydney, degree, m with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

203 words

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temperatures
hours of daylight
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London
Sydney
December 2018
weekend
information
data
summarise
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features
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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do •give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

Some Universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

globalization is positive for economics, but it’s negative side should not be ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?