The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the altered ratio of network consumers in the
USA
,
Canada
, and
Mexico
in a decade.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the percentage of
Canada
was
in
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the peak of its
periods
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period
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, and
Mexico
is in the
lowested
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lowest
trend
on
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the
moments
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.
To begin
, the proportion of the
USA
stood at around 20
percent
in 1999
then
its stability rose to roughly 80
percent
in 2009. Compared to the
USA
,
Canada
had a significant jump from around 10
percent
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to approximately 60
percent
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in 2003.
However
, the
USA
and
Canada
overtook each other in 2005. In 2005, each country achieved their own achievement respectively, and almost 40
percent
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for
mexico
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Mexico
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and nearly 70
percent
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for the
USA
and
Canada
.
In contrast
,
Canada
had the largest consumption group of customers almost 100
percent
in 2009.
Additionally
,
USA
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the USA
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was a second expenditure
of
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the internet was close to 90
percent
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and for
Mexico
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Mexico,
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it just had a small
amount
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of clients, just over 40
percent
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per cent
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, canada, mexico, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • users
  • Internet
  • trend
  • fluctuated
  • increased
  • remained stable
  • growth rate
  • sharp increase
  • anomalies
  • economic development
  • government policies
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • comparisons
  • initial
  • subsequent
  • consistently
  • peaked
  • plateaued
  • significance
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