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Please answer very good answer to this It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#driverless #cars #individuals #society
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In
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 modern era, the
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 of
driverless
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cars
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 increased significantly. There is a notion to
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implement
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 technology for private use and society. In
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 essay, I will explain why I disagree with
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 opinion and support it with several reasons. The invention of automatic
cars
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 may bring some benefits,
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, they
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 have numerous side effects to be considered.
Driverless
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cars
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 mean that all the operations led by Artificial intelligence (AI),
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 driving in the public street cannot be fully rely on AI because there are many incidents that could happen suddenly.
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, control of humans must be involved to increase safety. To illustrate, Tesla as the pioneer of self-driving
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,
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 has several issues regarding the AI's false to detect an object in front of it and needs human control to drive. Another issue
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driverless
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cars
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the decreasing
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 of job opportunities. Currently, driving is a job that
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 demanded by low-level economic society.
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, if automatic vehicles are widely used, they could replace driving jobs and the increasing
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 of unemployment may increase.
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, the worsening could impact directly the economic growth of a country.
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, the job opportunity as a driver will fall and the
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 of jobless growth will directly impact
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the national GDP. In conclusion, the result of
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 use of
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cars
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 could lead to car incidents and unemployment rates. I,
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, remain firmly convinced that the idea of automatic
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 for private use and society should be abolished.
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structure
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content
Develop your main points further by providing more specific examples and evidence. This strengthens the argument and makes the essay more persuasive.
task response
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language use
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Driverless cars
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Human error
  • Traffic congestion
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly
  • Machine learning
  • Artificial Intelligence
  • Adaptive algorithms
  • Unemployment
  • Surveillance
  • Cybersecurity
  • Liability issues
  • Infrastructure
  • Mixed traffic
  • Smart cities
  • Regulatory framework
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