While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

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to university, more people ought to be boosted to perform

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vocational

training because there

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qualified workers like electricians and plumbers. I totally agree because encouraging the training gives more

skills

, and doing the

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training is more necessary for preparing

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the world of

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reasons for my stance

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with, the primary reason is pushing the

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training not only obtaining the knowledge about academic, but

also

trainer gains more

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material

, and they perform many practicing their majority.

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time namely around 5 hours,

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immediately the matery.

Hence

, they are going to acquire more

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training

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important for exercising the

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capacity

in the world of

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.

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real

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time to the student doing the apprenticeship in some companies.

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, they will obtain many views, and they gain the modals to

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To conclude

, I agree

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student

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more training because

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can make

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having

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many

skills

, and they own the modal to

work

so that they are able to

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the qualified workers.