The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sector in new Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sector in new Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
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The pie chart illustrates the marketing of mail orders for the sales division from 2003 to 2013 in New Zealand.
Overall
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, as can be seen, travel accounted for the highest sales in 2003
while
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film and music took over the place which aimed for the most popular trade. Two divisions (travel and clothes) have a similar pattern as they rose in the trend whilst the remaining categories declined in a decade. In 2003, there were a number of people who liked to spend their money on travelling through online shopping at 36%
although
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the lowes came from books. The subsequent categories showed the percentages in the middle of interest which counted at 24% and 21% (clothes, film and music, respectively. In 2013, all of the elements indicated a change. The lowest category in the past period increased dramatically to 33% (film and music)
whereas
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book sales grew around 22%.
In contrast
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, travel spent 29% which fell from the
last
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decade
as well as
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clothes with just about 16%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • online shopping
  • retail sector
  • New Zealand
  • comparison
  • increase
  • shift
  • traditional
  • popularity
  • platforms
  • technology
  • internet access
  • consumer behavior
  • preferences
  • factors
  • growth
  • impact
  • brick-and-mortar stores
  • challenges
  • opportunities
  • future trends
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