Getting older for some
people
is worse Use synonyms
while
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the
others believe that it is an improvement in Correct article usage
apply
this
current day compared to the past. From my perspective, I agree with the second statement that arising the old Linking Words
ages
indicates a development Fix the agreement mistake
age
on
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in
quality
of human lives, in terms of Add an article
the quality
healthy
and Correct article usage
a healthy
supportif
environment.
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supportive
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, Linking Words
in
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for
few
reasons, some individuals argue that being old is totally bad. The main reason is Correct article usage
a few
because
older Replace the word
that
people
in every country Use synonyms
Add a missing verb
are concern
concern
to unproductive ages, Replace the word
concerned
which
should retire and have no energy to earn money or work again. Correct pronoun usage
they
In addition
, Linking Words
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as the
the
result of Correct article usage
a
the
retirement and aging, Correct article usage
apply
the
older Correct article usage
apply
people
tend to be like babish again, and need somebody to Use synonyms
nurturing
them. The second reason is Change the verb form
nurture
because
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that
,
they Remove the comma
apply
attend
to become Verb problem
tend
burden
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a burden
in
their children's Change preposition
to
familiy
. It can be seen from the data in each region, Correct your spelling
family
families
most
Correct pronoun usage
that most
of
families decide to bring their elderly to a home for caring Change preposition
apply
older
Change preposition
for older
people
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
other
believe that has Fix the agreement mistake
others
long
lifespan indicating a wealthy place. Correct article usage
a long
Good
environment, Correct article usage
A good
for instance
, is Linking Words
a
main key for Correct article usage
the
people
to Use synonyms
having
a long life. Wrong verb form
have
In other words
, if the air is Linking Words
refresment
for Correct your spelling
refreshed
elderly
, it can help them to have a good inhale; if the earth is versatile for plants, it leads the old individuals to eat organic and herb foods which are better for their bodies. Correct article usage
the elderly
Furthermore
, having Linking Words
longer
age Correct article usage
a longer
also
points Linking Words
that
the infrastructure of health in that region is well-managing. Change preposition
out that
Consequently
, individuals who have retired have Linking Words
been not worry
about nursing care since their areas provide better management Change the verb form
been not worried
been not worrying
on
health.
In conclusion, Change preposition
of
while
the older person has Linking Words
retire
and cannot earn money again, their long lives have Change the verb form
retired
lead
Wrong verb form
led
good
stigmas that Change preposition
to good
indicating
Wrong verb form
indicate
healthy
place where Add an article
the healthy
a healthy
the
Correct your spelling
they
are
live.Unnecessary verb
apply
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